The effects of food desserts within the MS Delta and how it affects children and their families. Is that a wordy title?

My title is The effects of food deserts within the MS Delta and how it affects children and their families. Is that a wordy title?

1. Only complete 1-7 of the rubric (do not complete #8 appendices).
2. You must have at least 10 references
3. Make sure you cover each section in detail. 
4. Remember, you are proposing your research and not executing it; therefore, you should not attempt to recruit and survey participants.
5. Your proposals should reflect scholarly work.  You should not google or Wikipedia signs and symptoms of your social problem and present it as a research proposal.  However, you should cover each portion of the proposal guide in your syllabus relative to the social issue and research questions you developed.